This is in response to Rochelle’s Weekly Photo Prompt.

Word Count: 100

Uncle stretched his hand leftward…Then rightward…Then drew an arc in the air.

We were on a cycle rickshaw.

The driver happily paddled on straight ignoring his directions.

No signboards on road.

The locals knew the route by heart.

But was he not a local ?

Uncle said he was – appointed to drive us around our entire staycation.

“Why don’t you tell him the right route?”

“He is stone deaf.”

“But you are giving directions to his back turned on you.”

“Oh!” Uncle tapped him on the shoulder.

“Eh!”

Finally…

90 Words

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Footnote : This communication lapse took place on our way to Chandaneshwar Temple situated on the Orissa border.

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28 responses »

  1. Nusrat Khan's avatar Nusrat Khan says:

    Of God’s gifts,the sense of hearing and speech are undoubtedly the most beautiful.

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  2. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    Haha! Great take Geeta

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  3. Chris Hall's avatar Chris Hall says:

    That’s a good one, Geeta!

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  4. Dale's avatar Dale says:

    Haha! Best to have let uncle know from the start!

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  5. Hazel's avatar Hazel says:

    I’m staring at the signage and trying to understand it. I wonder what uncle leads up. Interesting story, gc

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  6. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

    Fun story, Geeta!

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  7. Prior...'s avatar Prior... says:

    great realistic story about the communication lapses that can occur – and I liked your AI image to go with it too –

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