This is in response to Rochelle’s Weekly Photo Prompt for Friday Fictioneers.

Word Count: 100

The road trip to Digha was meticulously planned.

A week’s stay.

The Resort we put up in was close to the sea. We could see it from the balcony and at night go off to sleep listening to it.

It was startling how endless hours passed by watching the waves kiss the shore and then run back to woo the horizon.

It was love at first sight with the blue expanse.

And you.

When it was time to leave I knew the bond was forever.

With the sea.

But

With you… it was not to be.

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Trivia : Described as the Brighton of the East by Warren Hastings in one of his 1780 letters to his wife, Digha is the most visited sea resort/holiday destination in West Bengal.

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29 responses »

  1. So soft and sad at the same time.
    The sea stayed loyal.
    The person didn’t.
    That contrast quietly hits the heart.
    Thanks, GC, for letting me know about Digha resort.

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  2. Sandra's avatar Sandra says:

    Nicely reflective. The sea does that.

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  3. Prior...'s avatar Prior... says:

    great ending – ha!
    and you described the way I feel about Destin, FL – a soothing beach to me – and not all beaches are….
    The third sentence has a nice assonance with the long ee sound, “sea, see, sleep.”

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  4. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    Lovely story Geeta.

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  5. That ending was a sucker punch after being lulled into a false sense of security by the lyricism. Well done!

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  6. The ending certainly crept up on me with unexpected pathos.

    Beach holidays can be really dangerous for relationships as well as creating them.

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  7. James Pyles's avatar James Pyles says:

    The sea is said to be eternal. Not many other things are.

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  8. Rupali's avatar Rupali says:

    Lovely and the angle 😁

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  9. James McEwan's avatar James McEwan says:

    Yes, we are all drawn to the sea, anything else can wait.

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  10. Chris Hall's avatar Chris Hall says:

    Ah, very poignant. Lovely writing, Geeta!

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  11. Violet Lentz's avatar Violet Lentz says:

    A delicious memory nevertheless.

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  12. Beautifully written love story, Geeta …. even if it didn’t work out

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