This is in response to Sadje’s Weekly Photo Prompt on #Whatdoyousee
In the fabled depth of your eyes
That vague outline of a sky
Peers at me
Your clasped hands
Laboured breath
Quivering lips
Weigh on my soul
I want to believe
You
Your words
Your promise
Is it a path to a dead end
Or
Have my dreams suddenly misted
Into a blur
The mirror doesn’t hold the truth
It fogs
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GC, this poem feels like love met a weather forecast—skies, mist, fog, the whole climate report.
Maybe it’s not fate playing tricks, maybe it’s just condensation working overtime.
Either way, keep the drama coming—it’s more refreshing than Netflix. 😂😄
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Wicked analysis of poetry
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Relax, GC 😄 this time it was just witty sarcasm sneaking in for a change. A friendly critic is like that spice which makes the whole dish better—without it, things get bland real quick! If you enjoy these spicy replies in future, just give me the signal! 😊😊
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I know you are being what all you said you were. 😂😂
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😂 Aha, GC… you dodged my query like a pro! So I’ll take that as a secret yes to more spicy replies in the future. You are sure to enjoy, and I am confident, and Also I know that, you don’t mistake me or mind .😂🤣
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I don’t. Actually your reply made me laugh.
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Perfect then, GC—laughter received is the best green signal. Now I know my replies land well, and you read them with a smile, not a frown.😂😊
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Sometimes I am a little taken aback by the profundity of your remarks though
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Haha 😄 sometimes my replies just like to sneak in a little depth—mostly to be different from the usual routine applause, not to get all serious on you!😊😊
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😂 Haha, I see you caught all that… but the real question remains—do you want me to leave ‘sprinkle sugar’ or serve straight-up ‘witty chaos’ next time? 🤣😂😄
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You are going to write “serious”and “sincere” comments 😜
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Haha 😏 only if by “serious” and “sincere” you mean masterfully disguised chaos with a sprinkle of truth!
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Super poem for the prompt.
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Thank you Esther
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Beautifully written and very evocative poem Geeta. Thanks for joining in.
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Thank you Sadje for accepting my poem to the prompt
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It’s a pleasure my friend
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GC, Loved your take on the prompt.
I liked it instantly. 👌🏻👏🏻🙏🏻
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Thank you so much 😊
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Fantastic poem, Geeta!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
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[…] Geeta; Mist in my eyes […]
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Beautifully worded. ‘Mirror doesn’t hold the truth, it fogs’, so true.
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Mirrors do lie sometimes. Great take.
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Thank you very much
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You are welcome.
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