This is in response to Rochelle’s Weekly Photo Prompt For Friday Fictioneers

Word Count : 100

My mind wanders in any moving vehicle. And then I doze off. That’s two of the reasons I don’t drive. The third – I hate driving.

In one of my adventure sprees I had driven to Office – twenty seven kilometres one way.

On return I stopped at a red signal to distant honking growing louder. I ignored. Till an agitated stranger walked up to my car and shouted, “Hand brake!!! Can’t you see madam your car is sliding backwards!!!!”

No I can’t…

I am numb

No…dumb

And so damn

Sleepy….

90 Words

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You can read the other stories here.

Trivia : The prompt reminded me of our National Highways crisscrossing the vast subcontinent and the occasional sprints to Murthal , Haryana, crossing the borders just to have the most delicious stuffed paranthas in one of the road side dhabas.

My favourite playlist on such road trips

My heart

Longs for those

Days and nights

Of leisure

Or

A loner

In the city

In search of

A nest

A home…

These songs are memory

And Bhupender Singh’s voice…deep…. sonorous…remorseful

I am somewhere on the brink of childhood

Till I

zzzzzzz!!

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About gc1963

A working woman with interests in reading, writing, music, poetry and fine arts.

36 responses »

  1. nihshabdblog's avatar nihshabdblog says:

    The handbrake story was priceless! I’m still smiling. 😄

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  2. Hazel's avatar Hazel says:

    I just love driving my bike.😁 I didn’t drive vehicles with engine yet. Wonderful story, gc, and your music is calming.

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  3. Drifting off to sleep

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  4. Loved this, Geetaji 😊. The handbrake incident had me smiling, and the nostalgic road-trip memories added such warmth. Your ending was perfect—drifting from childhood memories straight into sleep! ❤️

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  5. I truly love your voice and style within your writing, and your handbrake story definitely showcases it!

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  6. Nusrat Khan's avatar Nusrat Khan says:

    Dil dhoondta hai phir wahi-Memory sliding backwards,no handbrakes needed 😂

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  7. Carol anne's avatar Carol anne says:

    ejoy the music, and the ZZZ! I feel it is better to be the passenger in a car!

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  8. Love your handbrake story! You have such a way of writing. xo

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  9. poetisatinta's avatar poetisatinta says:

    😃had to laugh at your handbrake story Geeta 🙌

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  10. I see, you are not the one for long drives… 🙂 Nice one Geeta ji.

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  11. plaridel's avatar plaridel says:

    drive carefully. it can be hazardous to your sanity. 🙂

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    • gc1963's avatar gc1963 says:

      I don’t drive at all. I don’t like driving as I said. I’d rather be driven. As far as sanity is concerned I guess without the wondering I’ll not be able to retain my normalcy. Thanks Plaridel.

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  12. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

    Geeta, I have the same problem with driving; I get real sleepy. Happy she got out of the situation safely.

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  13. Chris Hall's avatar Chris Hall says:

    That was a good one, Geeta!

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  14. Rupali's avatar Rupali says:

    A good one, Geetaji.
    Even I prefer to relax and enjoy the surroundings.

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  15. 🤭🤭🤭
    I couldn’t think of anything to write because of laughing!

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  16. Kwadwo's avatar Kwadwo says:

    Don’t dream and drive.

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