This is in response to Rochelle’s Weekly Photo Prompt for Friday Fictioneers.

Word Count: 100

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The Point Of Dissension

Baba said, ” Let me tell you all Rama’s story. He inherited his grandfather’s small, dingy shop and turned it into a huge departmental store through diligence, industry and ethical business.”

The children looked unimpressed, “Oh! That must have taken a lifetime!”

“You start small and grow big,” Baba replied.

“We want to start big and get bigger.”

“You are inexperienced and may make mistakes. It’s better to make small ones than big blunders.”

They disagreed.

And the argument still continues between two generations, values and approaches.

Hope they see eye to eye at some point.

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  1. Prior...'s avatar Prior... says:

    Geeta, I enjoyed your story for the prompt and had to smile with how the youngens say “We want to start big and get bigger.” – but much growth too soon, can cripple.

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  2. Will's avatar Will says:

    Nice story.

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  3. Perhaps, no matter how you start, growing big is the wrong purpose

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  4. Sadje's avatar Sadje says:

    Good point made in your story

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  5. poetisatinta's avatar poetisatinta says:

    Nicely played out Geeta🙌

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  6. James McEwan's avatar James McEwan says:

    Yes, sometime the younger generation think they know best.

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  7. Lisa or Li's avatar Lisa or Li says:

    Geeta, I guess it doesn’t hurt to hope 🙂

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  8. Dear Geeta,

    I suspect the young ones will find out that Baba was right. 😉 Good one.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  9. Dale's avatar Dale says:

    And so it goes from generation to generation! Nicely done, Geeta

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  10. Lovely. So true. And so it will carry on.

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  11. Thanks for this thoughtful post, Ma’am! I certainly hope that the younger generation will realize that real meaning lies in the process rather than attaining the big goal!

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  12. The all too familiar generation gap…and so it goes. Nice story!

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  13. Chris Hall's avatar Chris Hall says:

    Good one, Geeta!

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  14. Nice story. I feel like I have this running conversation with my 19 year-old son!

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  15. I think they will find out Baba is right.

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