
I was thinking of a verse
When baarish
Came…achanak…!
On a pleasant dopahari
Not too warm not too chilly
The sort which dozes you off
But mausam, you know, is a puzzle
Changes colour like a chameleon
From grey to black to a hue darker
And then the silvery clatter
Pitter…Patter….Pitter…Patter
Without bidding adieu
The wind fiercely blew
They said it brought along
Strains of a wanton song
Evening walked in too
As usual…(untimely)…who knew?
It’s like those guests
Too early or too late
When you are in wait
Ishhhh….
But the sky was true
To the mood you see
Woo hoo…!!!
It dripped on tiptoes
Till a red umbrella bobbed by
The kitchen window….I sighed
“Oh! How red it is….Look!!”
But it just waved and shook
A wild thought passed my mind
Even if it pours through the night
It will not be bleached white
And that gave me something to write
On baarish
Knocking in achanak
On a desultory dopahari
Oh! This mausam
Ishhh
***
Baarish – Rain
Achanak – Suddenly
Dopahari – Afternoon
Mausam – Weather
Ishhh – An ejaculatory sound










Wow, Geeta ji! What a delightful, fun poem! The way you’ve woven Hindi words into the verses makes it even more enjoyable. A well-crafted piece!
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Thank you so much Kaushalji
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Awwww this is a joyful poem!
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Thank you so much 🙏
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You’re welcome!
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What fun
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Thank you so much Derrrick. I am glad you liked it.
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What a delightful downpour of words!
The way you’ve caught the “achanak” mood swings of the mausam is as playful as the rain itself. It’s these little splashes of imagination that make your verse feel like baarish on a sleepy dopahari. Ishhh… indeed! 👍🏻🙂
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Thank you so much 🙏🙏
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🙏🏻🙂
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loved this!
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Thank you Yvette
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😉
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Beautifully written
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Thank you so much 🙏🙏
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Loved the Hindi words you’ve used in your poem.
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Thank you Sadje
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You’re welcome ☺️
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